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A Pokemon detective story 1

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Chapter 1 introduction

Welcome to the story of a detective named Jeffrey as the story unfolds for our detective is running after someone who has made a very big mistake trying to steal something from the detective, let alone a very dangerous explosive.

The thoughts running through Jeffrey's head was how in the world that this person stole the device let alone right under his nose, he was starting to worry that he would not be able to catch him.

When suddenly his partner Kisa ran and struck him on the right side of his head knocking him out. running behind Jeffrey catching up finally was his other assistant Lyra "did you finally catch him?" Jeffrey shook his head "no, but I'm glad Kisa captured him" reply Jeffrey smiling.

"Good" replied Lyra "now we just have to drag him back to the detective's office and see if we can't get him arrested for stealing good's"

"If you two are done talking about curtains, can you help me carry this guy back to the station he's rather heavy" replied Kisa.

Jeffrey and Lyra look back as Kisa was dragging the person back to where the pursuit started. all of them made their way back to the station and reported the capture of the dangerous criminal and took the suspect away "I'm glad we got that out of the way" replied Lyra.

"So what do we do now?" asked Kisa to Jeffrey "well," said Jeffrey "we could check the bulletin board and see if there were more criminals to capture." "i think we've done our share of capturing criminals for today." replied Lyra.

"Nonsense!" said Kisa "we could still get some more criminals be for its sundown."
Jeffrey turned back to see his two Pokémon assistance's talking back and forth about either continuing their work to capture more criminals or to rest.

The argument was getting rather loud and some of the other detectives looked at the office to see Jeffrey and his two Pokémon argument getting rather out of hand. Jeffrey said loudly "enough!!" both of Jeffrey Pokémon looked at him sheepishly.

Jeffrey took a deep breath and said "Kisa we have done our fair share of capturing criminals for today, we should get some rest,"

"We have captured 4 criminals in a row not to mention an extra one that we were not expecting," Jeffrey said smiling "we have worked a lot today and besides we don't do night cases except on special occasions."

Kisa shrugged her shoulders "very well." Lyre only giggled, Jeffrey only smiled and said "let's get ourselves out of here." Jeffrey and his Pokémon started to walk for home and think about today's cases. Jeffrey was rather proud of his two Pokémon.

Not only that they been a big help to his cases but also really good companions, he could not imagine what would happen if he did not have them.

As they were starting to head for home, not 10 steps from the office they heard an alarm from the bank on the other side of the street.

And saw three men getting in a car with black ski masks, black clothing and 2 of the criminals had two bags each filled to the brim with stolen money and was trying to start the vehicle.

Jeffrey had no time to delay, him and his Pokémon started for the vehicle. immediately one of the men turn and aim a gun at Kisa.

Jeffrey responded with a mental jerk at the gun, the gun pointed away and fired at the ground missing Kisa.

At the same time the man that was trying to turn on the vehicle. Lyra done a mental nod and the keys thrust out of the man's hands and into Lyra hands.

The man trying to start the vehicle shouted with dismay. the two men stepped out of the vehicle and raised their guns at Jeffrey and his Pokémon.

Before the guns could fire Kisa slashed at them with her sharp claws, slashing the guns in half. the two men were stunned at what happened were suddenly knocked over the head by Lyra's thunder punches before they knew it.

The last man in the vehicle was still trying to find what happened to his keys. when Jeffrey stood over and pointed his small handgun at the man "you should just give up now, your other companions are tied up already"

The man look up at Jeffrey's handgun and slowly raised his hands up. five minutes later the police came and arrested the three bank robbers.

"That was a relief." reply Lyra Stretching her arms back and forth "that was nothing." said Kisa "just another day at work." Kisa was smiling, Jeffrey look back to see his two Pokémon talking about today's cases.

Jeffrey turned his head back, Jeffrey and his two Pokémon walking down the street to head for home.

Jeffrey was thinking to himself how thankful he was to have the ability of psychic Pokémon. not to mention a few other abilities as well, his family has always had the ability to communicate with Pokémon without a translator not to mention  some of the abilities as well, but I'm getting ahead of myself.

Ever since Jeffrey was little he knew he was different from most people, he stayed with his family and rarely left his home. only for his job as Detective, he knew that the job that he done was dangerous but to help people was something he wanted to do.

Jeffrey was not only a detective but a P. I as well so he was rather busy at times and sometimes not able to head home for at least two months or so. thankfully his last case had finished and was now going home for a week or two before his next case.

Jeffrey stretched his head back and forth as kept his eyes closely on the road walking home..=}
finally after all this time the first chapter is on DA I'm so happy.


but it's not complete yet if there were some errors on it I'll fix it I just wanted to put it on DA finally.


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karlarei2003's avatar
Great beginning!

I'll help you go over the grammar when you come back over!